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 The rent is doubled (temporary title)

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Panel 1- Man is walking down the street listen to music on his headphones
Panel 2- Due to him listen to music he takes a wrong turn
Panel 3- Well walking down the man encounters a robber holding a knife
Panel 4- Unaware the man tries to introduce himself to the robber 
Panel 5- The robber robs the man of his headphones and wallet
Panel 6- The man tries to run after the robber to get his stuff back

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Panel 7- The man is trying to reach the robber and a rock is in view
Panel 8- The Man trips on the rock leading to the robber getting away.
Panel 9- The man just sits on the floor in pain from the fall
Panel 10- The man goes up and starts to limp
Panel 11- He limps his way to a Police Station
Panel 12- He fails a Police report on what happened 

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Panel 13- The man slowly walks out of the police station heading home
Panel 14- The man on his way home checks his phone and sees that rent is due today
Panel 15- The man realizes that the rent money was in his wallet
Panel 16- He walks back home upset and the song he was listening to plays in the back ground
Panel 17- He enters his home and sits on the bed with his hands other his face crying
Panel 18- His Cat comes other and tries to comfort the man to no effect

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Panel 19- There was a knock on the man's door it was the landlord
Panel 20- The landlord wants the rent money, but the man explains that he had been rob and can't pay the rent
Panel 21- The Landlord out of kindness he will let the man pay the rent next month but it will be double the normal rent
Panel 22- Puzzled the man accepts the deal than realizes that mans he allow has a month to make the money
Panel 23- He tries to think of a way to make the money but is to hungry to come up with any ideas
Panel 24- The man after making breakfast heads off to work, but the rent is still at the back of his mind

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Panel 25- The man is heading to the door of his job but is still sadden by the fact he was just robbed
Panel 26- The man is unable to do his job as he is distracted by the robbery and the rent
Panel 27- The boss realizing that the man is unable to work at the moment tells the man to go home
Panel 28- As he is walking home he feels even worse as he will be losing money from not working
Panel 29- He lays down on his bed and tries to take a nap
Panel 30- He is woken up by his alarm which cause him to realized he slept though the whole day 

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Panel 31- As he is eating breakfast he tries to come up with ideas to make money.
Panel 32- Well come up with ideas it goes back to yesterday and try to remember what the robber looks like but can't think of what the robber looks like.
Panel 33- Defeated he call off work for a whole month
Panel 34- Due to this he then realizes how is he going to be able to pay double of month rent
Panel 35- The man lays on his couch in sorrow as he doesn't know what to do. 
Panel 36- As the image of the man fades away it reveals the title of the movie


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